Seashore In Lapis Lazuli

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Crepuscular is waning afternoon,
in lapis lazuli does day respire.
The seashore chimes its solitary rune
as tentative the lapping waves acquire
the briny echo of a mermaid's lyre.
Though timidly does surf caress the beach
in mirrored shades of night as they conspire,
brave wisps of comets in the untold reach
of space diffuse and pluck my heart into the breach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/26/2018 2:03:00 AM
Wonderful example, and so rich with imagery and metaphor, (used well, I might add, not just injected for its own sake - something I see a lot of lately) ... I am never disappointed when I read your work, Dale - I get VERY little time to read and comment, (and I love to do so and miss it - hopefully changing soon), but there are a few authors here at PS that I can go to time-after-time for poetic refreshment, and you are one of those few. Excellent work, My Friend! :-)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/26/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thank very much for you amazing compliment, Greg.
Date: 6/21/2018 6:06:00 PM
Most enriched in poetic imagery. CONGRATS.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/21/2018 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha.
Date: 3/31/2018 7:06:00 AM
Lovely, Dale! Congrats!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/31/2018 8:30:00 AM
Thanks very much, Kim.
Date: 3/30/2018 10:47:00 PM
Love your rich imagery, Dale. Congrats on your most deserved win.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/31/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thanks you, Line.
Date: 3/30/2018 8:33:00 PM
Dale, your poetic lines are enchanted with sumptuous beauty and are a delicacy for my mind.. 'The briny echo of the mermaid's lyre' - blissful imagery indeed! Exquisite poetry! Warmest wishes always..
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/31/2018 8:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Date: 3/29/2018 1:05:00 AM
many congrats on your win Dale!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/29/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Jan!
Date: 3/24/2018 5:17:00 PM
Your imagery is so divine Dale I got chills reading this it is so so beautiful:-) adding to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/24/2018 5:20:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Jan. My first try at this form.
Date: 3/24/2018 3:50:00 PM
This one flows so smoothly Dale, it is enchanting
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/24/2018 4:32:00 PM
Thanks, Chris. Great to hear from you.
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