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Seashells Tableau

Murmur ambience
above and beyond
freewheel breeze filled sea.
Nascent from their shells,  
unfurl winks, feeling
white salt spray of waves.


10/30/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve, I really liked your imagery and personally would have liked to see this much higher:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Thank you for your kind words hugs sweet friend
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 3:42 PM
enticing write which deserves a win, eve.. congrats and thanks for your creativity.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:40 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your win.
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Beautifully written, Eve. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:59 PM
One of my favorites here, Eve. Congrats in the contest.
Michaels Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Swinging back around with congrats, Eve! Kind regards, John.
Michaels Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Great imagery, Eve. I especially liked the "Nascent..." line! Very creative. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:02 PM
THE winks!!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:01 PM
VERy creative work, Eve. Loved teh winks line!!!
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:43 PM
what lovely imagery Eve this is so descriptive, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 10:42 AM
A sure winner I read here, Eve, love the imagery you have evoked:)
Williams Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Beautiful imagery to match your beautiful poem Eve. Good luck in the contest...Maria
Y. Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Hi Eve, I loved the picture you painted with words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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