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Seashells

The hiss of the sea,
From the hollow of a shell;
Soft ocean whispers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 12:24:00 PM
The whispers of the ocean lie inside, nicely penned.
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:00:00 AM
The hiss of the sea. nice job
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Date: 4/15/2009 8:40:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, Raul! You are so gifted! And I just learned today is your birthday. Wish I could sing "Happy Birthday" to you, but you're probably better off that I can't. (Not a great singer.) But my best wishes go out to a Super Souper, Raul! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:15:00 PM
I like to listen to the whispers of the ocean too, nice work
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:13:00 PM
Excellent!! Very good Haiku
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:08:00 PM
great hiku dude i have the best hiku righting freind in the world lol >>>josh
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:34:00 PM
I love to listen to them, great sounds they cast.
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:21:00 PM
The hollow of a shell, nice line. You captured the beautiful essence of a seashell. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 4/3/2009 7:51:00 PM
The whispers of the sea, echoing from a seashell, nice work. Tyler
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Date: 4/3/2009 4:40:00 PM
I love to put a seashell to my ears and listen to the echoes of the ocean..well done haiku brother.
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Date: 4/3/2009 4:19:00 PM
You're spot on with your observations in this poem. When I think of the sounds coming from a shell, whispers is so fitting. Interesting use of this short form. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us and for your kind comments on my lanterne. Keep on writing! Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 4/3/2009 1:43:00 PM
Raul, I like the way the sea speaks to you in this captivating haiku. -gene.
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:49:00 AM
sense of mystery in this great haiku! Raul! Jim
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:37:00 AM
Excellent word selection here to convey rich relative sound pertinent to the subject. A fun haiku, without doubt! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:27:00 AM
Nice soothing sounds Raul, the hiss of the ocean and its soft whispers. DN
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:22:00 AM
an excellent haiku, Raul! the hiss... to the soft whispers!! the imagery is brilliant!! ~ Arany
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