Seashells

The hiss of the sea,
From the hollow of a shell;
Soft ocean whispers.

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Abe Lopez

April 18, 2009 at 12:24 PM

The whispers of the ocean lie inside, nicely penned.

Tyler Davis

April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM

The hiss of the sea. nice job

Carolyn Devonshire

April 15, 2009 at 8:40 PM

What a beautiful poem, Raul! You are so gifted! And I just learned today is your birthday. Wish I could sing "Happy Birthday" to you, but you're probably better off that I can't. (Not a great singer.) But my best wishes go out to a Super Souper, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Steve Edmonds

April 5, 2009 at 5:15 PM

I like to listen to the whispers of the ocean too, nice work

Belinda Parish

April 4, 2009 at 11:13 PM

Excellent!! Very good Haiku

Josh Torres

April 4, 2009 at 10:08 PM

great hiku dude i have the best hiku righting freind in the world lol >>>josh

Chris Goombi

April 3, 2009 at 8:34 PM

I love to listen to them, great sounds they cast.

Elizabeth Neal

April 3, 2009 at 8:21 PM

The hollow of a shell, nice line. You captured the beautiful essence of a seashell. Love Elizabeth

Tyler Martin

April 3, 2009 at 7:51 PM

The whispers of the sea, echoing from a seashell, nice work. Tyler

Christopher Higgins

April 3, 2009 at 4:40 PM

I love to put a seashell to my ears and listen to the echoes of the ocean..well done haiku brother.

April 3, 2009 at 4:19 PM

You're spot on with your observations in this poem. When I think of the sounds coming from a shell, whispers is so fitting. Interesting use of this short form. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us and for your kind comments on my lanterne. Keep on writing! Blessings to you. Karen