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Seashells

angry at the waves on thrown out of the safe sea happy in child's hands 09 July 2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2021 3:42:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/13/2021 8:04:00 AM

congratulations Alex, most deserving for this haiku.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/13/2021 11:24:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/13/2021 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations, Alex, your win is well deserved with this sound Haiku.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/13/2021 11:24:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/10/2021 8:51:00 PM

Wonderful personification in this haiku, Alex. Resonates with me so well. Thank you, Gershon

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/11/2021 5:35:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/10/2021 5:37:00 AM

A beauty! What a finely penned Haiku. The final line captures childhood innocence so precisely. Cheers, Brian

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 6:39:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/10/2021 3:44:00 AM

Brilliant, I can hear them laugh in a child's hands, Christuraj:)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2021 6:42:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 7/9/2021 6:24:00 PM

It's so much fun to hold seashells. You brought back happy memories.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/9/2021 8:25:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2021 2:48:00 PM

ahh, what great way to personify seashells

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/9/2021 8:27:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/9/2021 2:42:00 PM

love collecting seashells - to me they bring stories from far away. a great haiku! BW ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/9/2021 8:29:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/9/2021 12:59:00 PM

Beautiful imagery... Kids love them, even adults to, but they belong in the sea, where they are alive :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/9/2021 8:31:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/9/2021 11:15:00 AM

One of childhood's simple pleasures. A happy outcome for the seashell! :D

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/9/2021 8:33:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2021 7:53:00 AM

what wonderful imagery I used to love collecting shells as a child:-) hugs jan xx

Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/9/2021 8:33:00 PM

Thank you very much.