Seashell Days

lazing by the shore
whispers flee from ebbing tides
winds howl in silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 11:23 AM
A lovely first offering to the soup. A belated welcome. I hope you are enjoying your time here.
Hoffman Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Thank you, Richard. I've written a few others but it's been a while. Now that the holidays are coming to an end, I hope to get back in my groove.
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Love the contrast here. I just had to come see your first post. Welcome to Soup.
Hoffman Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 1:19 AM
"whispers flee from ebbing tides" makes the sea sound mysteriously mystical.
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May 21, 2019 at 7:18 AM
Thank you for reading my work too, my friend. I appreciate that.
Hoffman Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 7:55 AM
Thank you for your comment, Caren. This is my first poem on Poetry Soup and I am enjoying reading your work.
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