Seascapes

Seascapes

Amber kissed ocean
Beneath sun’s fiery burn
Wave upon sienna shores.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 12:59 PM
this is a great haiku way better than mine (no wonder i didnt even place was my first haiku) the second line was very beautiful and i loved it! good write=)jo
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Jeralynn. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:01 PM
Hey cool Haiku, Jeralynn! Very good. Gotta try one now. God bless--Robert
Haick Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Wonderful Haiku, Jeralyn! I wish you good luck in Raul's contest! Great job! Peace, love, Audrey
Hilliker Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Well written Haiku for Raul's contest. Best of luck to you.
Bono Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 1:59 PM
nicely said.you have soup mail.
Owens Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 1:55 PM
This is a beautiful Haiku...I've read a lot of them and there are so many wonderful interpretations...I would hate to have to judge this contest...lol....Marty
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