Seascape Haiku Verse 2 - How Deep?

The deepest ocean
Becomes shallow at the edge
How deep will you go?










Co-inspired by Raul's contest and by our minister's talk today on Integral Spirals of
Consciousness, going higher and deeper in stages and states.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 3:34 AM
So many times we block our growth by saying within our mind I can't go there for we have to go there and work through that though and come out on the other side a victor ...Very deep thinking that you have penned....Your kind comments on my work made my day...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 5:17 PM
wow, you really went "deep" with this one. Very nice. And thanks for your lovely comments to me today. Luv, Andrea
Dufresne Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 5:07 AM
by the way, considering your comment... you may want to check out "Interior Castle" by Teresa of Avila...and other works by her , I think also "Fire Within". Up to you.... thanks for your comments and for sharing your poems.
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 12:07 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Linda. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
Hilliker Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:09 PM
I like it. Such a great question. It asks so much in so little words.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:06 PM
A great Haiku for the contest Linda dn good luck with this "beauty" .. my entry is Serenity.. these contests allow us many outlets to grow in creativity .. I just enjoy the competition and challenge of them.. a wonderful entry Linda.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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