Seascape Haiku

The sun is setting
Incoming tide laps my feet
My thoughts turn to God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mckenzie Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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June 4, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week..Keep the good writes flowing..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Congrats Linda on your featured poem this week on Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Iyer Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Divine.
Roberts Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 7:37 AM
lovely
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June 1, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Linda. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 4:33 PM
Linda = wonderful ending to this haiku - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ
Fisher Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Wonderful haiku - many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
Sweetheart Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 8:48 PM
Congrats Linda on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a great one to share with us all.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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May 30, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Keep that faith shining. Thank you for sharing your inspirational words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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March 24, 2010 at 5:08 AM
This is a beautiful setting. And God's hand is truly visible in each setting sun. Beautiful, Linda. Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 2, 2010 at 5:02 PM
Beautiful reflection. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Keep that faith shining. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Haick Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 5:29 PM
Nice Haiku, Linda. A picturesque Haiku....I imagine the serenity here. Thank you for reading and posting your comments on mine. Peace, Audrey
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February 27, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Hi Linda, Always a pleasure reading this poem. My earlier comment still pertains. Funny I was trying to remember if your last name had a - in it so I could bring you up on the soup and went back to my comments and there you were! ta da! Just wanted to say hey! Thank you for your comment --i'm sure you can come up with your own take. God bless. Good hearing from you.-Robert
Dufresne Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 4:45 AM
now this Haiku is just plain lovely and contemplative, Linda It puts me there and instantaneously lost in it. Very very nice. Into my favs-Robert
Sweetheart Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Imaginative and beautiful Linda and good luck in Raul's contest if this is your entry .. a wonderful impression of the photo.. an inspirational piece.. luv.. and HVD to u and yours... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Palli Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 12:41 AM
Excellent!
Hilliker Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 9:30 PM
Beautiful Haiku. Good luck in the contest.
Owens Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 8:35 PM
Beautiful Haiku...Enjoyed...good luck in the contest ...Marty
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