Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Sea's Chapati Board

sea’s chapati board
                                nature's unseen roller rolls
                                   wave touches shore 




                                  Contest: monoku madness
                                  Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Paul Callus April 2, 2016 at 2:18 PM You present a lovely image, BL....and your explanation further down the page has also been of help. Regards // paul Bl Devnath April 2, 2016 at 2:43 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your much appreciation and credit. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski April 1, 2016 at 8:35 PM A most enjoyable monoku BL :-) Bl Devnath April 1, 2016 at 11:07 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich April 1, 2016 at 7:21 PM This was fun to read, BL Bl Devnath April 1, 2016 at 11:06 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2016 at 3:36 PM - A wonderful image, dear Bl - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath April 1, 2016 at 3:38 PM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Wish you also a great weekend. Loved always, bl

J. Tudor April 1, 2016 at 10:16 AM An excellent analogy...quite creative. J. Bl Devnath April 1, 2016 at 10:22 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl