Searching--A Gogyohka String

I searched
so hard
trying to find           
the me
in myself


on the edge
of darkness
I find                        
myself searching
enlightenment


she saw the light
within me 
when                         
I opened
the door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 14, 2012 at 2:16 AM
Chas, now this is just outstanding..Dave
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