Searching the Sky

searching the sky 
for a hint of blue
and a swallow or two
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 13, 2026 at 8:57 AM
Hi Peter. Your haikus are always a joy to read. They capture moments in time beautifully. Here, I view the swallow and blue sky as symbols of hope and brighter days after a period of not so bright days perhaps? Here’s hoping all is well with you. Although I haven’t personally written a new poem here for almost 2 years I do still read others’ works and always look forward to reading your work. Cheers - Gary
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September 13, 2026 at 9:49 AM
Thanks Gary great to hear from you. I’ve been very quiet for a little while, but I’m hoping for better things . I always enjoy your work and I shall look forward to reading more in the near future, I hope ! Best wishes, Peter
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