Searching Solace

I still remember that stay, 
           that day, that week, that May...
You told you would come, 
            and i waited all the way.


Time kept ticking, 
           was painstaking...
You didnot come, 
       n left me brooding.


I shuddered, i muttered, 
          n finding reasons...
why i loved you, 
          loved you for seasons....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Nice expressions on the lost love
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Amit. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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