Searching For Solitude

There’s just something about solitude that brings ease, 
sometimes seclusion is all my lonely soul requires.
When the suffering in silence brings me to my knees,
I feel a private escape is all my detached soul desires. 

Solitariness can be quite beautiful if allowed in serenity, 
each bone in my body aches to be quieted and subdued.
I inhale gently and try to drown in sweet tranquility, 
hoping to erase my sequestered and forlorn mood.

When abandoned by the world I can become reclusive, 
I start to wish I could retire from the chaos of existence.
My internal confinement starts to become exclusive
as I have a dream to live a life without resistance. 

I find pulchritude in the splendour of isolation, 
I hold confidence that being by myself will relieve
my troubled mind giving me a mitigating sensation, 
though some call me ludicrous and naïve.

So, when I feel I need a retreat from all that drains, 
I pursue depths that heal until only solitude remains.




May 3, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/5/2018 2:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. The only way to get peace is to search solitude within.
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Date: 5/4/2018 8:40:00 PM
'When abandoned by the world I can become reclusive', ah, yes, that reclusive state of being but I like to abandon the world when it seems the world won't release me. Nicely penned lines, Laura. Congrats! All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 5/4/2018 7:28:00 PM
Lovely melancholic poem, Laura. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 5/4/2018 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this deeply felt expression of solitude's beauty for you. Your expressiveness pulls me right in. My thing is I want to remain there and have to make myself leave that security for my own health. I would be perfectly happy by myself in such surroundings forever. I enjoyed this.
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Date: 5/4/2018 10:47:00 AM
luloo, your search for solitude has served you well. It brings out the best in you in so many ways as evidenced on Soup. I read, with great interest, your view of solitude are realized that it enhances your already deep care for others. You certainly have become a beacon of encouragement to me. So, your time spent in solitude allows you the time to reflect and to reach out to others. How wonderful that is to me!
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Date: 5/3/2018 1:41:00 PM
Hello Laura, solitude is great. I find mine in my music CD's I unwind listening to my classical music CD's. It works for me all the time. I do have other music I listen to as well. Have a nice day my friend.
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