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Searching For Salvation

Trembling in the cold Suffering in the darkness Longing for the light

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 4/17/2017 7:37:00 AM

Lovely haiku. So eloquent and well word painted

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 12:23:00 AM

well done, Ellie. linda

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/15/2016 8:30:00 PM

Hi Ellie, You penned a good haiku. You so much in a few lines. Well done. I would also like to say welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a place where you can learn and grow from other poets like you. P.S, When have the time stop poets like you: -) Alexis

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2016 1:04:00 AM

Ellie, thank you for the post. SKAT

Frederick Espiritu

Date: 7/14/2016 8:11:00 AM

nice haiku... dittoing my feeling...

Ellie Anne
Date: 7/14/2016 8:14:00 AM

Thank you :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/14/2016 8:10:00 AM

Lovely Haiku....it doesn't seem like you're new to this. You definitely have to post more!!!

Ellie Anne
Date: 7/14/2016 8:15:00 AM

Haha, it's been a hobby of mine for a while, thanks for noticing =] as for most things, there's always room for improvement!