Searching For Salvation

Trembling in the cold
Suffering in the darkness
Longing for the light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breedt Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Lovely haiku. So eloquent and well word painted
A   Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 12:23 AM
well done, Ellie. linda
Y. Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Hi Ellie, You penned a good haiku. You so much in a few lines. Well done. I would also like to say welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a place where you can learn and grow from other poets like you. P.S, When have the time stop poets like you: -) Alexis
A  Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 1:04 AM
Ellie, thank you for the post. SKAT
Espiritu Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 8:11 AM
nice haiku... dittoing my feeling...
Anne Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Thank you :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Lovely Haiku....it doesn't seem like you're new to this. You definitely have to post more!!!
Anne Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Haha, it's been a hobby of mine for a while, thanks for noticing =] as for most things, there's always room for improvement!
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