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zen swirled, tea leaf clouds wisps of chi on autumn’s breath… scent of sunflower **31 Jan 2016**

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Date: 3/21/2016 2:53:00 PM

Hi David, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This excellent Haiku goes into my faves....Vlad.

Date: 2/8/2016 12:05:00 PM

Great Haiku! Loved the feel of your write, it's very pensive, and it is technically well written.

Date: 2/5/2016 2:21:00 PM

Forgive me if this doesn't translate well... You have done an amazing job at capturing that "things as they are" aspect of Haiku. Well done David.

Date: 2/3/2016 2:32:00 PM

Excellent...very creative...the search for the top winner is over:) #7 // paul

Date: 2/2/2016 3:46:00 PM

wow, this is fantastic, David!!

Date: 2/2/2016 7:51:00 AM

such meditative rhapsody as is chi is balanced, david... well done!..huggs

Date: 2/1/2016 5:49:00 PM

Nice poem with an Asian flavor! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Date: 2/1/2016 3:09:00 PM

David, love the haiku. The best of luck in the contest. SKAT

Date: 2/1/2016 2:45:00 AM

Oh this is good! Excellent! A 7