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zen swirled, tea leaf clouds
wisps of chi on autumn’s breath… 
         scent of sunflower

         **31 Jan 2016**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Hi David, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This excellent Haiku goes into my faves....Vlad.
Inman Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Great Haiku! Loved the feel of your write, it's very pensive, and it is technically well written.
Solnox Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Forgive me if this doesn't translate well... You have done an amazing job at capturing that "things as they are" aspect of Haiku. Well done David.
Callus Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Excellent...very creative...the search for the top winner is over:) #7 // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 3:46 PM
wow, this is fantastic, David!!
Onclaud Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:51 AM
such meditative rhapsody as is chi is balanced, david... well done!..huggs
Anish Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Nice poem with an Asian flavor! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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February 1, 2016 at 3:09 PM
David, love the haiku. The best of luck in the contest. SKAT
Gentry Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:45 AM
Oh this is good! Excellent! A 7
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