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fog drifts through the woods hovering above the hill searching for something Heidi Sands 1/4/23

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/5/2023 6:30:00 AM

Moment beautifully captured. Lovely images.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2023 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/5/2023 12:36:00 AM

A nice one, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2023 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Jo :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/4/2023 5:18:00 PM

Cheers! I can relate as a former San Franciscan, Heidi, and I trust that it yields in dissipation in both our hills and eyes as well my friend, Aloha William

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2023 6:12:00 PM

Thank you William. It is nice to see your comment :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/4/2023 2:13:00 PM

Great haiku, Heidi. You captured a stunning scene in which I can feel the fog above the hills.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2023 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Sotto. I appreciate your kind comment :)