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Bus monitors, support staff, heed this plea, before you are home free. Be vigilant, Check every corner, crevice, every nook you see. A child left behind, abandoned in fear, Is a wound and stain that sears.

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Date: 4/21/2024 4:13:00 PM
Glad you have rhyme in here. Although if I am being honest, I think this would at least look more poetic if this was a 6 line poem. Anyways congrats on your win in my contest.
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 4/23/2024 5:50:00 PM
Thank you for your honest feedback. I appreciate it. I am still learning.

Book: Shattered Sighs