Search For Sustenance

search for sustenance
legs, feelers collaborate
green blend in disguise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 7:00 AM
very nice, Audrey :) wish you the best in the conetst :)
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April 28, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Reads like a winner BFF and good luck with this caterpillar depiction of the photo.... am having a three day marathon so will be on and off Soup... when I get a nannosecond of time from "honey poo"...luv.. Linda-Marie
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April 28, 2010 at 2:47 PM
I think you managed to embody much of what that picture entailed. Good luck in this rather difficult challenge (I found it difficult becuase it made me think more along the lines of a senryu, thinking of the caterpillar as a soul instead of focusing on nature!) LUv, andrea
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April 28, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Audrey, a very cool take on the photo, I didn't enter this one. Thanks on your congrats: on the "Sacred Seasons" just one I wrote a good while back, about one of my many trips in the spirit.Smile. Agape, Moses
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