Search For Sustenance

search for sustenance legs, feelers collaborate green blend in disguise

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2010 7:00:00 AM

very nice, Audrey :) wish you the best in the conetst :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/28/2010 4:18:00 PM

Reads like a winner BFF and good luck with this caterpillar depiction of the photo.... am having a three day marathon so will be on and off Soup... when I get a nannosecond of time from "honey poo"...luv.. Linda-Marie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2010 2:47:00 PM

I think you managed to embody much of what that picture entailed. Good luck in this rather difficult challenge (I found it difficult becuase it made me think more along the lines of a senryu, thinking of the caterpillar as a soul instead of focusing on nature!) LUv, andrea

John Freeman

Date: 4/28/2010 8:15:00 AM

Audrey, a very cool take on the photo, I didn't enter this one. Thanks on your congrats: on the "Sacred Seasons" just one I wrote a good while back, about one of my many trips in the spirit.Smile. Agape, Moses