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note ~
  how kisses create the vacuum
                vacuum creates the ease
      this ease exists within "the interior"
   it is there that I will keep you safe 
           our forever & after 
     a continual persistence of ~ cared for ~
                tilt your face to the perpetual sun
          of my ever-present & complete devotion

childlovemotherother

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Paige Hind

May 18, 2026 at 11:22 PM

This is beautiful, !!

Laurentine G

May 20, 2026 at 7:52 AM

Thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues

May 15, 2026 at 4:29 AM

Lovely! Congrats!

Laurentine G

May 15, 2026 at 10:26 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Tom Cunningham

May 13, 2026 at 9:40 PM

Short and sweet, I sense devotion and love in your words LG. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Laurentine G

May 14, 2026 at 3:08 AM

Thank you Tom! Yes going well - a visit to the theatre under my belt and I saw a bit of sunshine this morning :)

Ink Empress

May 13, 2026 at 2:49 PM

I might post my poem too tmrw…

Ink Empress

May 13, 2026 at 2:48 PM

Pleasure reading! Sending you light always! Cute poem! So sweet and meaningful!!!!!

Suzette Richards

May 14, 2026 at 8:11 AM

Laurentine G

May 14, 2026 at 5:15 AM

(sealed with a loving kiss from what I read when looking at wartime love letters :) )

Suzette Richards

May 14, 2026 at 3:59 AM

We are on the same wavelength... Mostly :) or should it be SWAK ... Whatever...lol Thanks for the support

Laurentine G

May 14, 2026 at 3:09 AM

Ha I'm not sure you'll see this reply Su but it was indeed the first picture and I did think about SWALK :) thanks for the placement :)

Suzette Richards

May 14, 2026 at 2:05 AM

I saw it as the first picture of the 4, ie, SWANK (sealed with a kiss) ... ;)

Laurentine G

May 13, 2026 at 2:51 PM

Thanks Ink - it did end up on the cute side and I can't add any notes to indicate which picture it relates to, so I think the majority of my intention got washed away :)

Ink Empress

May 13, 2026 at 2:47 PM

I wss musing on this subject the other day! A little emo over my son turning another year. I know what motherhood feels like! Honestly! N in few words uv delivered one that would resonate with many. I sent my poem to my son, he was moved by it but said … he understood 80 percent hahah its normal cus most dont understand metaphors and abstract poetry sometimes , but why must we stay simple? Van gogh Said once it seems “ why is so difficult to be simple? “ ok m rambling. Its 3 am! Hahah

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