Sea View and Love's Loss

Sea View And Love's Loss

They are quivering
With beauty and strange alarm,
Wild roses in the thunder.

The great sea drowned
Those tiny footprints
On the sands
Of my lonely heart

Robert J. Lindley
May 23rd, 2016

Note: Edited version from a longer, ten verse poem written back in 1982.
This was as compact as I could make it and still keep the imagery, message, sad loss whole and felt, seen and/or appreciated by the reader.
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Lee Sr. Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 5:47 PM
Love, Peace and blessings for you and your family and friends.. Be bless in this New Year of 2019. Write on...Thank you for all you do, your words means much to us... "There is praise in words and words in praise" James
Sharp Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 12:22 AM
The briefest piece that I have seen from your pen, and one of the finest. Deeply mournful, and beautifully written. Fave. A very Happy New Year to you and your loved ones, my friend.
Ashley Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Your sadly beautiful and breathtaking imagery has captured my fascinated attention, my dear friend. The sense of loss is keenly felt through the heartache of your verse. Your talented pen has dipped into your deep well of emotion to create this shining poignant and poetic gem. Exquisite poetry, Robert, that I must fav. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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December 30, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Beautifully poignant Robert! I wish you the Happiest of New Years my friend. Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo
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