Sea Sick

I spent the afternoon at sea
Captain Jack Sparrow 
Had a hold of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 6, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Cile. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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July 5, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Oh, I bet many can relate to this one. Much said in just three lines. I've missed you. Hopefully, you had a wonderful holiday weekend. Karen
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July 5, 2010 at 3:24 PM
i bet we was a good mix
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July 5, 2010 at 3:23 PM
my favorite pirite. embarass me? i'm just like all the other soupers; i love the attention. john gotta go see you latter soup girl.
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