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Sea Shimmers

High beam touches Sea shimmers in full Moon night too in the Sunlight

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/5/2011 7:25:00 AM

nice imagery bl :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/5/2011 7:50:00 AM

Thanks, my friend, for your comment. bl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/4/2011 11:08:00 AM

I could just imagine this, BL :) enjoyed reading this :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/5/2011 7:51:00 AM

Thanks, my friend, for your comment. I am trying just. bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2011 10:04:00 PM

NICE one, BL!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/1/2011 12:28:00 AM

Thanks for your nice comment. You have it, my friend, bl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/30/2011 8:20:00 PM

Subtle an d lovely, the shimmer of the moon is so beautiful.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/1/2011 12:27:00 AM

You are more, I know. I am trying to reach to the sense where beauty of poem lies, my friend. Thanks for your comment of appreciation,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/30/2011 7:26:00 PM

B.L., the beauty expands... this is a very beautiful haiku... latley i've been trying out haikus... as you can see on my poem log.... but, there is a few poets here that confuse me al.... but, this i can feel.. and imagine...plus more.. you have a good night,..p.d.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/1/2011 12:24:00 AM

Thanks my friend. I am not confused of your write. Whenever I am not certain, I take time to understand that. You have got sufficient strength to pen your pen. God always bless you from every respects. Thanks, have a sweet nice day.bl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/30/2011 11:26:00 AM

Living by the sea, I see the shimmering colors both day and night. A lovely haiku, BL. Love, Carolyn

Bl Devnath
Date: 11/30/2011 11:31:00 AM

Many thanks for your sweet comment. Thanks, bl