Home » Poems » Bl Devnath » Sea Shimmers

Sea Shimmers

High beam touches			
                                  Sea shimmers in full Moon night			
                                           too in the Sunlight

introspectionhaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Black Eyed Susan

December 5, 2011 at 7:25 AM

nice imagery bl :)

Bl Devnath

December 5, 2011 at 7:50 AM

Thanks, my friend, for your comment. bl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 4, 2011 at 11:08 AM

I could just imagine this, BL :) enjoyed reading this :)

Bl Devnath

December 5, 2011 at 7:51 AM

Thanks, my friend, for your comment. I am trying just. bl

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2011 at 10:04 PM

NICE one, BL!!

Bl Devnath

December 1, 2011 at 12:28 AM

Thanks for your nice comment. You have it, my friend, bl

Elizabeth Wesley

November 30, 2011 at 8:20 PM

Subtle an d lovely, the shimmer of the moon is so beautiful.

Bl Devnath

December 1, 2011 at 12:27 AM

You are more, I know. I am trying to reach to the sense where beauty of poem lies, my friend. Thanks for your comment of appreciation,bl

Poet Destroyer A

November 30, 2011 at 7:26 PM

B.L., the beauty expands... this is a very beautiful haiku... latley i've been trying out haikus... as you can see on my poem log.... but, there is a few poets here that confuse me al.... but, this i can feel.. and imagine...plus more.. you have a good night,..p.d.

Bl Devnath

December 1, 2011 at 12:24 AM

Thanks my friend. I am not confused of your write. Whenever I am not certain, I take time to understand that. You have got sufficient strength to pen your pen. God always bless you from every respects. Thanks, have a sweet nice day.bl