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Sea Shells

Rinsed aground. Recording existence. Abandoned dwellings wait to be found. Each new tide Decorates the seashore – Leaving remnants of moments in time. Dawn awakens. Sunlight sparkling the sand – A woman strolls, collecting seashells. Her thoughts soar. Oh sweet creative mind! Histories preserved in jewelry. © March 1, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: PARALLELOGRAM DE CRYSTALLINE Sponsor: Nette Onclaud FORM: the Parallelogram de Crystalline ---created by Karan Naidu--which consists of 4 verses of 3 lines each..the syllable count is 3,6,9..

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Date: 3/9/2012 5:15:00 PM
Nice and lovely write,Dane.Congratulations on your win...
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:36:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest; I like the image of histories preserved in jewellery :-)
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Date: 3/9/2012 12:33:00 PM
Congrats Dane on your win.Very nice poem.
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:53:00 AM
Great work..Very creative indeed..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/8/2012 11:24:00 PM
i love that part: histories preserved in jewelry!! Such a beautiful way to save history. Love your imagery. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 3/8/2012 9:31:00 PM
congrats on your win in my contest, dane.. wonderful imagery:) hugggs!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/9/2012 3:00:00 AM
Thanks, Nette for choosing my poem as a winner. Big Smiles.
Date: 3/8/2012 8:44:00 PM
Great win, Dane Ann...creative touches in your winning write. Gwendolen
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:26:00 PM
congrats Dane Ann on a superb win for this intriguing write on seashells luv..
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Date: 3/1/2012 4:33:00 AM
Dane Ann I like this poem you have created today, have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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