Sea Shanty

As they were sailing ‘cross the ocean deep
They watched the sunrise and the diving grebe.

When up in the top, the lookout did spy
A storm advancing, with his weather eye.

The helmsman heeded the word from above
And steered the walty gal forth at a scud.

Night tide came fast and they were flooded by dark,
The waves surged and the salty, sea dogs barked.

The raw wind cut and the rain assailed down,
As men pooled together to fight off the drown.

The dodger succumbed, and the foremast fell
The ship was immersed in the maritime hell.

As dawn broke, with only waveson afloat.
The ocean had seized another game boat.

Good men will be mourned, and the tempest damned,
We left to ponder why they left dry land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 1, 2025 at 3:14 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 30, 2016 at 1:32 PM
AL, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
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June 10, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Al, Congratulations with your nice winning poem ... xox~ LINDA
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June 7, 2013 at 10:54 AM
thank you for choosing my contest. Congrats! ~SKAT~
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