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Sea Rest From Labors

Dusky twilight foam.
Ever flowing nearing shore.
No more suffering.


*For Contest

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February 14, 2010 at 1:59 PM

What a wonderful world that would be. Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Doris Culverhouse

February 14, 2010 at 11:51 AM

good luck in the contest, made me think!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 14, 2010 at 7:30 AM

A wonderful Haiku ..good luck in the contest as u have captured so perfectly the photo.. I just luv these kinds of contests... should do very well in placing.. u already read my Serenity... good luck again.. HVD again..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda Witt-King

February 13, 2010 at 11:15 PM

You also found the description of the physical led inward. That surprised me in mine. I tried several lines that would continue the description of the photo, but nothing felt complete until I surrendered to the poem's calling. Yours is haunting, Marty. I see the photo in a completely new perspective now.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 13, 2010 at 10:35 PM

Dear Marty, YOU are on YOUR game tonight A Winner for sure How quickly YOU climb to the top of the POETRY Ladder YOUR Clever and ingenious Writes INSPIRE GOOD LUCK (as if YOU need it ) in the Contest and Thank-YOU for YOUR continueing Support Of 'End Line Word" Thank-YOU also For YOUR Gracious. Appreciated Comments YOUR Liege ALWAYS... HG