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Sea Religion

when you dive into the sea you're an alien atmosphere you cannot stay within the waters surface their o zone layer a suit to breathe limited time stayer you cannot adapt and set up settlement just observe and take in the experience convoy as a pack and soak up elements all the while just a full visual sense to sea creatures you arrive otherworldly on giant ships they can't comprehend artificial materials not of the sea appearing and disappearing no end maybe smaller fish of trout and cod consider us creatures of God's but sharks and whales we're not, present, absent and then forgot for we can visit but they can't leave we pollute the place they breed or make clean so they can be fish them up toward heaven believed appear powerful and able to control when really nature holds the cards understanding with knowledge whole could believe us Gods, when really retards

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Date: 1/24/2020 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations Nick on your 7th place win in the "Jump" contest. I found your dive into the ocean and making it into a religious discussion interesting and offered good jumps. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for entering.
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