Sea of Madness

The sea is a mysterious place. It can be calm as a  summer lake, most like my mind in a 
calm state. But it can be a hard cruel beast with monsterrous waves and unearthly creatures 
waiting to devour the unexpected, crushing waves of distruction.They crash upon my mind in 
waves of pain, bashing my thoughts into a million different directions just like when they 
crash upon the sand. Seagulls circle like vultures waiting for the upchuck from the sea. M y 
mind swirls upon this sea  of madness. I cling to my rocky self hoping to have some control 
of the contents of my mind. I scream soundless screams. A sense of peace surrounds me it 
doesn't hurt anymore. The waves cover me like soft blankets promising comfort from the 
pain. Let go, let go it whispers let go i will save you, let me drown your thoughts and feelings 
no more pain no more fear. Let go, let go a sleep beneath my waves as i rock your battered 
to sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/16/2009 12:03:00 PM
Nice, very nice write comparing madness to the see. Loved it. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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