Vic Terano Poet Rhyme

Sea of Love Free Of

https://soundcloud.com/peach-stealing-monkeys/sea-of-love

I ask for her name
she says it's Elise
a wink and a smile
sent to me

I'm trying my best
to escape from a script
it is too rough
at the sea

of love
free of
the peace
of mind

my thoughts
are with
your soul
that's all

perhaps it's a dream
how smooth does it seem
on my palm
near the life line of you

I'm sensing the change
but it's feeling so strange
to observe all the roughness
at the sea

of love
free of
the peace
of mind

my thoughts
are with
your soul
that's all

the whisper of love
in the eyes of a fox
the lips that are red
from a kill

the time doesn't move
is this love? it's a groove
the natural hunt
of a thrill

for love
free of
the peace
of mind

my soul
is yours
to own
that's all

https://soundcloud.com/peach-stealing-monkeys/sea-of-love

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Skat A March 20, 2016 at 11:10 PM Vic, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2016 at 2:57 PM - Thank you for your first great poem, Vic :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2016 at 12:28 PM Vic,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@