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Sea of Dreams

The skies become loud and dark
Raining bombs upon us
May god protect the civilians
Take away the rest in rivers red
Let the devils blood flow far from us

We stare always to the skies
Our own tears falling
Thus we created our own sea of dreams
Here inside our prison city
Laughter is hidden underneath the bed


My pink lip stick and smile
I have only hope to eat
I have only the future to grasp
Because my death shall soon come to be
Death for forgetting the past

All we could do, living in daily fear
Is swim in our sea of dreams
Only to be drowned with our own blood
Here is my Photo, here is my dream
I lie dead, my dream I leave to you



Dedicated to Nisan Ibrahim who reported and wrote under the alias Ruqia Hassan.
She lived in the city of Raqqa in Iraq and was killed by Daesh around July 2015.
Hassan came from a Kurdish family that was originally from the town of Kobane, Syria, on the Turkish border. The family had at some date relocated to Raqqa. 

She was never to find that rest and peace. Maybe she didn't expect to. She wrote the same day: "Our biggest mistake was to swim in a sea of dreams... and we dreamt of the next phase and ignored the current phase... we look at the future and forgot the past... #a mistake we regret."
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Petersen Potter Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Excellent pen Arthur! A beautiful tribute to Nisan Ibrahin! And thank you for visiting my page. Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:) D.
Dunn Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Dear Arthur Well I'm back dear friend needed to get my inspiration back on and take care of some family business, but I'm ready to take on the world once more, tonight I will be writing again just waiting to take care of two things and I'm all on it again, here on this wonderful place called poetry soup, lol hope this comment finds you my friend well and happy, and I am looking forward to sharing this new year with you and the others here, cheri
Dunn Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Dear Arthur You my friend always write such wonderful pieces my friend, and this is know exception, loved the story and every line, all I can say is Wow what a wonderful tribute to this lost souls of the dreaming city of a better future, just to be lost, it is a sad reality, but in yet maybe in another way she found a paradise on the other side beyond, I'll hope she has my dear friend but I'm sure she is smile somewhere smiling down upon you now, and she knows how much you care, cheri
Roper Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Arthur, great tribute to a beautiful young woman. So much pain to endure by so many. Hugs dear friend
Onclaud Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:01 PM
this makes my heart clench, arthur.. such a riveting work so wrenchingly, beautifully done.. huggs
Callus Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 1:00 PM
We are all victims of fate. Whichever path we take will eventually lead to the destined end. An excellent poem, Arthur; will peace always remain a dream? // paul
Legend Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:35 AM
so sad
Lariviere Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 1:49 AM
triste
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:47 PM
oh arthur, this is so sad. But what COULD she have done. I doubt that she could have done a thing to have changed her fate. That poor beautiful woman. I love your empathetic nature.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 6:11 AM
BRAVO Arthur! An exceptional piece... we are indeed doomed to repeat history if we forget it. Best wishes, Keith
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 2:11 AM
A wonderful tribute Arthur - you tackle subjects other people shy away from Kudos to you:-) hugs Jan xx
Nunez Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 1:18 AM
A very beautiful tribute, Arthur. Your talent shines bright here. A well written piece story with a tragic end touched this reader so much I'm welling up... Great write!
Vaso Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Than you Kim you are so kind!
Smith Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:32 PM
That is great quote from her. A fabulous tribute Arthur
Vaso Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 8:15 PM
Thank you Tim, :)
Shahein Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:44 PM
This is a heartbreaking poem my friend , so deep and touchy , but though very strong and beautiful , you've touched my soul , I give it a 7 , hugs / / :) dalia
Vaso Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:07 PM
This is so kind of you, and yes a very sad story.
Nance Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 7:31 PM
This brings tears to my eyes.
Vaso Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Thank you so much Cas, yes a very sad story indeed!
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