Sea of Dreams

Breeze off the ocean 
The waves beating off the shore;
Basking in the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Lopez Avatar
January 12, 2009 at 3:23 PM
Sounds like Cancun to me, I have been there and would go again..............Very Nice
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January 4, 2009 at 6:26 PM
Nice use of imagery. Feels like a peaceful place to be. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Mckenzie Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 3:20 PM
Nice imagery I can see it from here! Lovely. Laura :)
Neal Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 2:53 AM
I had to take my hands out of my pocket to write this comment. I really like this haiku. Like Raul said, "I dream of the sea at times" but when I wake up I'm at school. DN
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December 30, 2008 at 12:23 AM
I dream of the sea at times and I wake up to a prairie reality. I love the way you took this by storm and described a lovely, peaceful scene. Great job here Caramel keep up the good work...Raul
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