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Sea of Dreams

Breeze off the ocean The waves beating off the shore; Basking in the sun.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 1/12/2009 3:23:00 PM

Sounds like Cancun to me, I have been there and would go again..............Very Nice

Date: 1/4/2009 6:26:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. Feels like a peaceful place to be. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/30/2008 3:20:00 PM

Nice imagery I can see it from here! Lovely. Laura :)

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/30/2008 2:53:00 AM

I had to take my hands out of my pocket to write this comment. I really like this haiku. Like Raul said, "I dream of the sea at times" but when I wake up I'm at school. DN

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/30/2008 12:23:00 AM

I dream of the sea at times and I wake up to a prairie reality. I love the way you took this by storm and described a lovely, peaceful scene. Great job here Caramel keep up the good work...Raul