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Sea of Despair

Lost in a sea of despair, Floating, just hanging there, It gets better they all say, Take it easy day by day. Weeks go by but still the pain, Nothing changes, life down the drain. You think it's easy to deal with this, Wait til you taste death's last kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/13/2010 12:47:00 PM
Really enjoyed your write and will read more of it. If you have not checked it already please take a look my new poem titled criminals part 3- thank for the read and enjoy your day.
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:06:00 AM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Alan. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2010 10:44:00 AM
Well written. Can feel the emotion I look forward to the time when death will be no more. (Revelation 21:3,4)
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