Sea of Despair

Lost in a sea of despair,
Floating, just hanging there,
It gets better they all say,
Take it easy day by day.
Weeks go by but still the pain,
Nothing changes, life down the drain.
You think it's easy to deal with this,
Wait til you taste death's last kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rich Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Really enjoyed your write and will read more of it. If you have not checked it already please take a look my new poem titled criminals part 3- thank for the read and enjoy your day.
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Alan. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
Palli Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Well written. Can feel the emotion I look forward to the time when death will be no more. (Revelation 21:3,4)
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