Sea of Confusion

Swimming in the deep sea of confusion.
Shed your inhibitions,stake a claim.
Life as we've come to know it's an illusion.
We'll get to the shoreline just the same.

Reality is at times the way we planned.
Pretense is not what we had in mind.
Recklessly,we crawl across the sand.
We are seeking what we'll never find.

In this nether-world our dreams are cruel.
Shifting gears,we gather up each thought.
Lessons like these can't be learned in school.
Dignity is something can't be bought.

So when the waves outlast you,hang on tight.
There's bound to be a life raft drifting through.
Sometimes all we have is second sight.
Forget the revelations you once knew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Falotico Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Your Talent shine through so well in this write...always a pleasure to read your work...Michael
Devonshire Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Profound observations, Deb. So often we feel like we are trapped in this "sea of confusion" and all we thought to be true appears then to be an illusion. Still, we press forward and hopefully the life raft appears. Awesome work, dear. Love, Carolyn
Amadore Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 11:30 AM
I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme...and many of your lines are memorable. Good work.
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