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Sea Mysticim

Sea waves
surface guards
of inner wet lords. 

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Controversial storm
hard-tackling the captains ship
God is the referee.

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captains spyglass failed
overwhelmed by ambushed storm
crew helter skelter.
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Plain hearted sea
men sailed
pirates flags raised up.

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Autumn sea breeze
echoing melodies
a beach lullaby.

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BY: CHARLES MELODY, (LIGHTNING INK).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/7/2012 6:34:00 PM
Charles, hi... :-)... stopping by to read a poem... i sway with the mighty feeling of your haiku, and waves... thanks... xox~PD
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Date: 4/29/2011 12:43:00 AM
glad I spotted u on here! ~JSLambert
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Date: 3/17/2011 8:31:00 AM
A nice series of Haiku's. The sea one of my favorite subjects. Maybe because I live so far away from one. It's power and mystery sparks my interest. love mom
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Date: 3/11/2011 2:39:00 PM
Beautiful haiku with apt images in each one, Charles
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:18:00 PM
Love these Haiku Charles. Especially the third one. Very picturesque. Have a good weekend! Always, Annalise
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