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Gloomy eastern day.   Softly on the sea, mist falls.   While watching the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/28/2021 10:42:00 PM
Loved this haiku. Perfectly composed with a third line surprise.
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Date: 3/29/2021 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Victor, Appreciate your nice comment.

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