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Sea Mist

Gloomy eastern day.

                      Softly on the sea, mist falls.

                                                            While watching the sun.
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Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 10:42 PM
Loved this haiku. Perfectly composed with a third line surprise.
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March 29, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, Victor, Appreciate your nice comment.
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