Sea Hiku


dawn d r       l e s paint on sea  
             i z z
       e l l   
s w         i n g   waves weave *golden* g a         n d~ 
                                                               r l a
land exalts f l o w i n g embroidery
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:37 PM
Lovely! Since each word is so expressive, I like when you write these short kus! Congrats!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 2:21 AM
Wonderfully done. I love it. God bless you
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 5:51 AM
Thank you so much for your read and for the wonderful comments.
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