Sea Crest - Ocean-Ku

Blue zest of sea spray
Gull hovers the ocean's crest 
Punctuation mark!

Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mannan Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 10:51 PM
Wow. Many congrats for this win Suz.
A   Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Suzanne, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 3:42 PM
So happy to see this on the winner's list Suz. Congrats on your win!
Jones Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations on your win...
Bacha Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Congratulation, love it, you are amazing in all your poems. Love Terry
Susan Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 12:20 AM
nice one... best wishes in the contest :)
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April 19, 2013 at 8:09 PM
Suzanne Delaney, a like the blue zesty spray. I can't stand them gull's. but, how I love your haiku. Good luck in the contest. ~*~SKAT
Esquire Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 3:32 PM
Dear POETESS,Spirit Nurse,SuZ, good luck in the contest. How many kinds of ku's are there?? Are The Japanese Haiku Master smiling at all these ku contest? a polite way of dishonor? I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Spirit Patient, Poet,Liege...Harry
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 7:17 AM
this is SO CLEVER!!! I this this ocean haiku contest is inspiring a really great crop of kus.
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April 12, 2013 at 9:39 PM
Suzanne, love the ocaen-ku... good luck in the contest...Linda
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