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(Entry for the Your Choice E Poetry Contest, Sponsor: Brian Strand, submitted March 25, 2025)

a sapphire sea bespeckled with sweet sunlight watch the fairies dance

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2025 2:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Very creative. Way to go. Sara K

Jim Healey
Date: 3/27/2025 3:11:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. Thanks for checking in.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/20/2024 11:29:00 AM

Hello Jim Healy, this beautifully done. I like when the sun shines on the water. it looks likes diamonds shinning. Now I will read your poem. enjoy your day my froiend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2024 2:50:00 PM

Hello Jim,. You are welcome my friend. /Darlene/ Enjoy your evening my friend.

Jim Healey
Date: 4/20/2024 1:28:00 PM

Thank you very much. I appreciate it. J.