Sea

ribbons of blues grays and greens
surround me in a fortress fit for a queen
the noises so forign to me
where am i the beautiful sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 7, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Nice work, I like the ending...Raul
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April 4, 2009 at 2:14 PM
soft, sweet poem, Dani, nice! Jim
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April 4, 2009 at 1:10 PM
This makes me think of floating in the Gulf of Mexico off of the coast of Panama City... Relaxing and beautiful. Your poem took me there. Thank you. Your words elicit feelings. nice rhyming, too.
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