Sculptor

O
                  natives
                    who
                    keep
                  alive is
                observing
   yes strict the commandments
                 engraving
                 chiseling
                 carving
                 stirring
                 ahead
                 laded
                 twixt
                  slay
                   and
                    mi
                     I




* Anyone interested can go to google and ask 
to see photos of Egyptian curved knives and
you shall find this one within. It is shape so my
friends..I do hope that you enjoy....mi

P.S. the pharaohs commanded the slaves to
carve or they would meet the above

P.P.S. Please take notice of the, "y" on the
seventh stanza..on my Micro word it was
emphatically the curve to the "y" to give
the authentic dagger look...unlike here on 
the Poetry Soup....lol
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Lamoureux Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Hi Mi, you didn't answer my question regarding Facebook.
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 8:21 AM
- Great, Mi !!! - Well done :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 7:56 PM
I like how you add a story to your poems. Historical context is important. I went back to Facebook and your Facebook account seems to have dissapeared???
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