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Scrumptous Evening

a pastel evening sweetens the chocolate tundra... a three flavored sky the sun melts away into sweet dreams of the night... earth sleeps satisfied
............................................................... For PD's Contest: Neapoliton Ice Cream

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Date: 4/16/2018 8:13:00 PM
Wow, deliciously beautiful, Carrie.
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Date: 10/7/2011 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2011 12:45:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on a top ten win with this yummy delight luv..
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Date: 10/6/2011 10:58:00 PM
Lovely and delightful imagery makes this one of the best of the Haikus, Carrie. Congratulations on a very well deserved win! Love, Annalise
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Date: 10/6/2011 10:39:00 PM
Great poem, so well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/6/2011 1:53:00 PM
A yummy portrait of sunset, Carrie. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/6/2011 11:53:00 AM
DEAR CARRIE.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.
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Date: 10/1/2011 3:57:00 AM
Scrumptious Haiku here, dear friend Carrie :) A winner for sure. Love, iolanda
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Date: 9/30/2011 2:13:00 AM
Very good haiku, Carrie. You make it look so easy am jealous.
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:52:00 PM
This is a great write for PD's contest! I can almost touch the sky with these descriptions! I love this poem, a very special work!
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