Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

Scrumptous Evening

a pastel evening

sweetens the chocolate tundra...

a three flavored sky


the sun melts away

into sweet dreams of the night...

earth sleeps satisfied


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For PD's Contest:  Neapoliton Ice Cream

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Line Gauthier April 16, 2018 at 8:13 PM Wow, deliciously beautiful, Carrie.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 7, 2011 at 8:09 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 7, 2011 at 12:45 AM Congrats Carrie on a top ten win with this yummy delight luv..

Audrey Haick October 6, 2011 at 10:58 PM Lovely and delightful imagery makes this one of the best of the Haikus, Carrie. Congratulations on a very well deserved win! Love, Annalise

Lee Ramage October 6, 2011 at 10:39 PM Great poem, so well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Carolyn Devonshire October 6, 2011 at 1:53 PM A yummy portrait of sunset, Carrie. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2011 at 11:53 AM DEAR CARRIE.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Iolanda Scripca October 1, 2011 at 3:57 AM Scrumptious Haiku here, dear friend Carrie :) A winner for sure. Love, iolanda

Charles Henderson September 30, 2011 at 2:13 AM Very good haiku, Carrie. You make it look so easy am jealous.

Russell Sivey September 29, 2011 at 11:52 PM This is a great write for PD's contest! I can almost touch the sky with these descriptions! I love this poem, a very special work!