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Scrumptious

I crave for that delectable cake that would gratify my taste and sight, You see, I do not know how to bake and that is the reason for my plight, Who knew that this pandemic outbreak would steal from me my scrumptious delight? 05.29.2021 For Line Gauthier's "Bite size poem 3" contest

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Andy Chunn

Date: 5/29/2021 1:19:00 PM

The pandemic caused everyone to suffer in some way. No cake can be serious. Nicely written. Thanks for your kind words and support.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/29/2021 11:12:00 AM

Real Bite Size. Beautiful.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/29/2021 9:03:00 AM

Exquisite. I gained six pounds just reading your poem, Jo. Chuckle! Lovely bite-size poem!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/29/2021 7:22:00 AM

Hi Jo, This is a good poem for contest theme. That sure does look scrumptious. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/29/2021 7:05:00 AM

Lol, could just demolish that jo Tom

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/29/2021 7:05:00 AM

This is so true; as you can see, this epidemic has deprived us of so many beautiful things; we hope the worst is over soon. Blessings and best regards

Joanna Daniel
Date: 5/29/2021 7:40:00 AM

I know, this is the least of my concerns now actually, though I thought it would fit the contest:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/29/2021 6:59:00 AM

I had to cut my sugar level but occasionally I go berserk. Hugs.