Screams

Broken silence,
Bombs exploded,
Choppers landing








    A Follow up response to Danial Corcorans  " Silence"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 10:11 AM
Superb followup here babe! Very vivid!! Hugs~Mary
Culverhouse Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 6:24 PM
good one,
Pickett Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 5:42 AM
Senryu is my favorite 5,7,5 rhyme.... Good job.....:JP]
Nutter Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 7:29 PM
Yes sir, medivac time for the wounded. Short but real.
Corcoran Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 5:17 PM
i like it. a perfect follow up. thankyou
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