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Screaming In Silence

How can it be that you are dead These thoughts keep racing inside my head I can not believe it, it can not be true How can I live in this world without you My life will be empty, my heart broke in half You're my reason for living, you make me laugh How can I go on, how can this be I'm falling to pieces, please can't you see I'm crying, and dying, and empty inside All of these feelings I can not hide Where do I turn, what will I do I just want to die and move on with you They say that I can't, they say I must stay I must keep on going to face the next day I can not conceive it, I feel out of breath I do not know how to deal with this death Oh, God please help me, please reach out your hand I need you to hold me and help me to stand I turn to you now, my saving grace Please take his soul to a higher place

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Date: 10/18/2013 10:15:00 PM
Touched my heart deeply.
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Date: 11/24/2011 11:01:00 AM
Beautiful piece. Keep up the excellent work! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/14/2011 1:20:00 AM
Dear Kirstie, Wow this is Awesome it touches home with me My Wife went to Glory on our Everlasting Wedding Day I feel the Pain YOU wrote this Masterpiece with By the way YOUR request "Please take his soul to a higher Place" I am sure has been Fullfilled. I am surprized that YOU have had no Comments on the First three POEMS I have read You should be getting more soon I have talked with several of our fellow POETS I'll Check with YOU later LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG
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Kirstie Fontes
Date: 11/14/2011 1:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for you praise and kind words. Most of my poems received comments when they were first written, but the system erases them over time. It is quite flattering to hear you say so though. Do you have some poetry I can read? Would love to check it out.