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Scraunch the Snow

He went out to enjoy this time given him Drinking, drinking punch filled to the brim The booze inside warmed-up slow He went out with show On the snow scraunch Went his steps After eating brunch Drinking a little light punch He fell over in a bundled hunch Dead, sad he wasn't sober for his last reps
Just playing around with this form. Not for a contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bahr Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 8:09 AM
That was laughter. Thanks for stopping by.
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 3:07 PM
You are quite welcome, Kathy. Sara
Horne Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 7:03 AM
LOL, had a chuckle picturing this one - love the pic too
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 3:04 PM
Why, thank you, Jack. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:05 AM
You wrote two "andares". I could barely write one. I deleted it several times and am still not sure it's good.
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Victor, I just messed up on this one on purpose just for fun. Laughter the best medicine. Thanks for stopping by. I see you wrote one and posted it and entered it in the contest. Sara
Poet Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Nicely crafted, Sara. You choose a fine theme with great imagery as well. Please check soupmail. Blessings.
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara
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