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He went out to enjoy this time given him Drinking, drinking punch filled to the brim The booze inside warmed-up slow He went out with show On the snow scraunch Went his steps After eating brunch Drinking a little light punch He fell over in a bundled hunch Dead, sad he wasn't sober for his last reps
Just playing around with this form. Not for a contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/24/2023 8:09:00 AM
That was laughter. Thanks for stopping by.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/24/2023 3:07:00 PM
You are quite welcome, Kathy. Sara
Date: 1/21/2023 7:03:00 AM
LOL, had a chuckle picturing this one - love the pic too
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/24/2023 3:04:00 PM
Why, thank you, Jack. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 1/20/2023 10:05:00 AM
You wrote two "andares". I could barely write one. I deleted it several times and am still not sure it's good.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/20/2023 12:00:00 PM
Victor, I just messed up on this one on purpose just for fun. Laughter the best medicine. Thanks for stopping by. I see you wrote one and posted it and entered it in the contest. Sara
Date: 1/20/2023 6:19:00 AM
Nicely crafted, Sara. You choose a fine theme with great imagery as well. Please check soupmail. Blessings.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/20/2023 6:38:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Book: Shattered Sighs