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Scoundrels of the Sea

Hunter Deadly scoundrels Waiting with argus-eye Living benthic Lunger Breed of the dreads Bull, tiger and great white Attacks Epic Sea dogs Of threat displays Meat eater they all say Ravenous shark! WRITER: OLIVE_ELOISA APRIL 16, 2014 12:59 PM CONTEST: THREADS OF SYLLABLES SPONSOR: nette onclaud 5TH PLACE

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Ivo Cos
Date: 4/25/2014 7:05:00 PM
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Congrats on this win, Guillermo. Magnificent piece.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 3:18:00 AM
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tHANKS Much Ivo... :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/24/2014 11:19:00 PM
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Congrats for your win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 3:17:00 AM
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Thanks Andrea.. :) GBU
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/24/2014 4:13:00 AM
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A unique thought on the theme,,, wonderfully done Olive,,, congrats on ur great win !
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 2:50:00 AM
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Thanks DR.. :) really appreciate your drop by.. :)
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/23/2014 10:44:00 PM
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Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 2:49:00 AM
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Thanks DR. :) I appreciate every drop by you made.. :) GBU
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/23/2014 11:53:00 AM
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a string of attacks in a metaphorical way?.. sweet cheers on your spot in my contest, olive.. huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/23/2014 12:13:00 PM
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Thanks Nette for giving me a spot..:) God bless us all..:)
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/23/2014 11:38:00 AM
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Congratulations Olive_eloi :) Didn't know that this was a contest entry. You did well in face of hardened adversaries :):) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/23/2014 12:11:00 PM
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As always Paul, I don't expect to win... I just always do my best..:) thanks Paul..
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/17/2014 11:50:00 PM
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Olive the Hunter, I had no idea!!!!!!!! Nice poem!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/19/2014 3:40:00 AM
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LOOL!! hahaha but am no deadly hunter sure,.. :D! :P thanks for visiting Arthur. :) hahahha
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/16/2014 8:12:00 AM
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Hi Olive_eloi.....this is an interesting write, somewhat different from usual. [getting more daring...sharpening your (teeth) skills!] :) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/16/2014 5:34:00 PM
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hahaha thanks Paul.. :) yes as I told you I like to try :) nothing to lose anyway. :D! :P +olive_eloi :)

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