Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Scoundrels of the Sea

Hunter
         Deadly scoundrels
     Waiting with argus-eye
            Living benthic
 

                Lunger
       Breed of the dreads
   Bull, tiger and great white
             Attacks Epic


             Sea dogs
       Of threat displays
   Meat eater they all say
         Ravenous shark!


WRITER: OLIVE_ELOISA 
APRIL 16, 2014
12:59 PM

CONTEST: THREADS OF SYLLABLES
SPONSOR: nette onclaud
5TH PLACE

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Ivor Kos April 25, 2014 at 7:05 PM Congrats on this win, Guillermo. Magnificent piece. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 3:18 AM tHANKS Much Ivo... :)

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2014 at 11:19 PM Congrats for your win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 3:17 AM Thanks Andrea.. :) GBU

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2014 at 4:13 AM A unique thought on the theme,,, wonderfully done Olive,,, congrats on ur great win ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 2:50 AM Thanks DR.. :) really appreciate your drop by.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 23, 2014 at 10:44 PM Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 22, 2014 at 2:49 AM Thanks DR. :) I appreciate every drop by you made.. :) GBU

Nette Onclaud April 23, 2014 at 11:53 AM a string of attacks in a metaphorical way?.. sweet cheers on your spot in my contest, olive.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 12:13 PM Thanks Nette for giving me a spot..:) God bless us all..:)

Paul Callus April 23, 2014 at 11:38 AM Congratulations Olive_eloi :) Didn't know that this was a contest entry. You did well in face of hardened adversaries :):) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 12:11 PM As always Paul, I don't expect to win... I just always do my best..:) thanks Paul..

Arthur Vaso April 17, 2014 at 11:50 PM Olive the Hunter, I had no idea!!!!!!!! Nice poem!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 19, 2014 at 3:40 AM LOOL!! hahaha but am no deadly hunter sure,.. :D! :P thanks for visiting Arthur. :) hahahha

Paul Callus April 16, 2014 at 8:12 AM Hi Olive_eloi.....this is an interesting write, somewhat different from usual. [getting more daring...sharpening your (teeth) skills!] :) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 16, 2014 at 5:34 PM hahaha thanks Paul.. :) yes as I told you I like to try :) nothing to lose anyway. :D! :P +olive_eloi :)