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Scorching Summer Day

hotter than hell
slugs curl drying in their shells
fan moving hot air


1/9/2021

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2021

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March 20, 2021 at 5:06 AM

Congrats, Eve ~

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2021 at 11:02 AM

love the humor and the pic. Back with more congrats, Eve!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 15, 2021 at 11:40 AM

- I like hot ... but not "hotter than hell" :))) - Congratulations on your win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

January 15, 2021 at 9:54 AM

Congratulation on your win. Yes, this is summer. Wish it was a cooler time of the year. Enjoy your win/day with blessings................

January 9, 2021 at 7:12 PM

When the 'slugs curl,' you know it's hot. Well-penned, Eve! :) gw

January 9, 2021 at 10:58 AM

Nice break from winter. Cool graphic.

January 9, 2021 at 10:50 AM

Makes Bud wiser? Aloha! Rico

January 9, 2021 at 3:19 AM

I can feel it.... through your "fiery" words... and "cooling" photo. God bless you.

Victor Buhagiar

January 9, 2021 at 1:10 AM

Well described. One must beware from scorching in Malta if you stay in the sun too much. ~~

January 8, 2021 at 11:52 PM

ooh such vivid imagery I winced reading that second line being boiled alive - how sad. great haiku Eve:-) hugs jan xx

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