Scolding Wives

Husbands are in heaven 
when wives scold not
they think they are in leven
when wives scold hot 

yet who you are
and what you do
is really not 
just up to you

when husbands 
do the dealing wrong 
we need told off 
for whats done wrong

What you see 
is what you get
a spoiled brat 
has got your cat

sometimes a wife 
can only see
the spoiled brat 
inside of me

sometimes with eyes 
that tender see
a better life
she builds for me

Sometimes with eyes
that see the stars
she dreams of things
like racing cars

sometimes we take 
a walk at night
and see the stars
we do not fight

sometimes we sit
upon the couch 
a teder moment 
cuddles count

say you love me 
tender true
I know I love you
through and through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Oyewole Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Great work! Congrats on your fine win, Bernard!!!
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 7:54 PM
Bernard, excellent poem about marital relations, congrats!
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Congrats Bernarde on your fine win. Nicely expressed rhyme - Connie
Kayode Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Congrats on the win Bernard . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:59 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, bernard
Palli Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Sweet, glad you have her
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