Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Rhyme

' Scissor '

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raven, lush, sleek skein
three-inched lengthy mane
spawned fluke - halcyon shimmer
in months sweet relish
crave to embellish
vanished bubbles - I wither.

gripping the scissor
I am in dither
LOVE gave me the axe - slayed me
chose to cut this crown
to erase this frown
"NEW ME" nestling ... no glee.

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*-* jun-jun villanueva

*-* "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" Contest

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Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 10:42 AM Congratulations on your placement in the "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud. CR

Dr.Ram Mehta September 6, 2011 at 6:07 PM Contratulations on the win in the contest,jun-jun

Tony Lane September 6, 2011 at 1:00 PM congradulations in a contest. Tony

Carol Sunshine Brown September 6, 2011 at 11:04 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage September 6, 2011 at 12:25 AM Jun-jun this is a great poem, so enjoyed. Congratulations on your win. Love Lee

John Freeman September 5, 2011 at 10:54 PM Congratulations Jun on your fine poetry's win. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards September 5, 2011 at 9:13 PM We all need a "NEW ME" from time to time....however we can find it....via a dither with the scissors or some other way! Love this thought!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 5, 2011 at 6:05 PM CONGRATS JUN-JUN ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN IN ALOUETTE WITH THIS TERRIFIC WRITE MY FRIEND.. AWESOME AS ALWAYS... SUPERBLY CRAFTED FOR CONTEST...LUV..

Nancy Jones September 5, 2011 at 4:50 PM Yay jun-jun! well deserved! ~N

Jack Horne September 5, 2011 at 3:55 PM Many congrats on all your wins, Junjun : )

David Williams September 5, 2011 at 3:24 PM jun-jun congrats on your wonderful win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2011 at 8:47 AM So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Jun-Jun. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 29, 2011 at 11:03 PM wow! what a glee... enjoyed,,, how are you?? here to say hi and read a few poems,..p.d.

Nancy Jones August 29, 2011 at 9:31 PM my sister once told me (after I'd had 10 inches or so chopped off) that when native american women went into warrior mode, they cut their hair short.... love this write, jun-jun, it recalled that to me. namaste ~n