Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Science Friction

The umbra of my Soul's eclipse,
Stellar dweller cosmic ships.
Solar flares and lunar lairs-
Blackest Holes and deep abyss...
Photo gamma satellite,
Telescopic magnetite.
Anti-Matter fusion shatters
Super-Nova afterlife
Gravimetric poly-synthetic-
Nano vortex optic aesthetic
(Overloaded circuits exploded!)
Isotopic pseudo-frenetic
Electromagnetic static compulsion;
Subatomic particle propulsion;
Supersonic chronic convulsion-
Microscopic mega emulsion.
Toxic, caustic antiseptic,
Hyperactive epileptic; 
Hydroponic telekinetic- 
Quantum neuro cybernetic
Paralyzed by all the Lies,
Erratic, manic muffled cries...
Catastrophic chaotic logic-
Conflicted, afflicted--dies!

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Mark Peterson April 17, 2014 at 11:49 PM Great how this turned out, Chan. What a fine job! So after death, does the baryon become carrion?

Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2014 at 8:00 PM I'm a science fiction fan so I absolutely love this one. Out of this world fun Chan. I wrote a rhyming poem this morning so you might enjoy it.

Scott Thirtyseven March 27, 2014 at 4:05 AM A nice play on words and rhyme. Fun to read...

Sophia Valentina March 24, 2014 at 7:23 PM Good stuff! Would make one hell of a spell :) Just That Archaic Poet March 25, 2014 at 3:19 PM You can borrow it lol ;)

Rick Richardson March 24, 2014 at 10:12 AM And I thought that a liberal arts education would make me a better poet. Damn, Chan, this rocks! Just That Archaic Poet March 25, 2014 at 3:20 PM Many thanks, Rick :)

Carrie Richards March 23, 2014 at 8:39 PM Even the title,.....wow, just drew me in, and then captured by the first line......wow, I love the way your words just pound out like the keys of a piano !! I was feeling the rhythm ! Terrific! PS.....I finally had a couple of hours to listen to Drake's radio blog show..(the archives) . I'm so impressed what a terrific show, how relaxed and fun your dialog ....Loved listening, Chan! Just That Archaic Poet March 25, 2014 at 3:20 PM Thanks so much , Carrie; I sincerely appreciate it, hon :)