Science Friction

The umbra of my Soul's eclipse, Stellar dweller cosmic ships. Solar flares and lunar lairs- Blackest Holes and deep abyss... Photo gamma satellite, Telescopic magnetite. Anti-Matter fusion shatters Super-Nova afterlife Gravimetric poly-synthetic- Nano vortex optic aesthetic (Overloaded circuits exploded!) Isotopic pseudo-frenetic Electromagnetic static compulsion; Subatomic particle propulsion; Supersonic chronic convulsion- Microscopic mega emulsion. Toxic, caustic antiseptic, Hyperactive epileptic; Hydroponic telekinetic- Quantum neuro cybernetic Paralyzed by all the Lies, Erratic, manic muffled cries... Catastrophic chaotic logic- Conflicted, afflicted--dies!

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Mark Peterson

Date: 4/17/2014 11:49:00 PM

Great how this turned out, Chan. What a fine job! So after death, does the baryon become carrion?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/29/2014 8:00:00 PM

I'm a science fiction fan so I absolutely love this one. Out of this world fun Chan. I wrote a rhyming poem this morning so you might enjoy it.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/27/2014 4:05:00 AM

A nice play on words and rhyme. Fun to read...

Sophia Valentina

Date: 3/24/2014 7:23:00 PM

Good stuff! Would make one hell of a spell :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/25/2014 3:19:00 PM

You can borrow it lol ;)

Rick Richardson

Date: 3/24/2014 10:12:00 AM

And I thought that a liberal arts education would make me a better poet. Damn, Chan, this rocks!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/25/2014 3:20:00 PM

Many thanks, Rick :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/23/2014 8:39:00 PM

Even the title,.....wow, just drew me in, and then captured by the first line......wow, I love the way your words just pound out like the keys of a piano !! I was feeling the rhythm ! Terrific! PS.....I finally had a couple of hours to listen to Drake's radio blog show..(the archives) . I'm so impressed what a terrific show, how relaxed and fun your dialog ....Loved listening, Chan!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/25/2014 3:20:00 PM

Thanks so much , Carrie; I sincerely appreciate it, hon :)