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Will You Go to the School Prom With Me? I Promise I Won't Shout With Glee. This is very hard to say. I feel like I had to say. As I watch you at school every day, I try to let you know. However, I stay at bay. You captured my heart a long time ago; the first time you smile at me, I did know. I could not let the thought go, reflection past when we were young my heart strummed and sung. You are special. You're amazing in all I see. My heart ignites blazing curiosity. I just love the way your ginger locks embrace, fall and trace around your face. When I look into your dark chocolate eyes, I melt and feel the shining in the sunlight skies. I love the way you laugh when you're around your friends. You are the fresh breath and light eager to start the day until it ends. I don't know how to say; when I am near you, I fear, I want to run away. You drive me to want to reach the unreachable, to touch the untouchable. I was wondering if you could be my date for the school prom. I promise, promise I won't let you wait. Make my dream come true and a chance at romance. We will listen to the music and dance; your heart with mine I chose. I promise I won't step on your toes. 2/1/2019 Poetry Contest: School time crush Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal

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Date: 3/9/2019 12:54:00 PM
Aww, such a sweet poem this is, " I promise that I won't step on your toes", it certainly put a smile on my face,I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours anyways, Many congratulations on your wonderful 3rd position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 2/2/2019 11:23:00 PM
You have certainly captured the awkwardness, the blush, of a teen-age crush! G.L. in the contest, Eve. :) gw
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Date: 2/1/2019 2:36:00 PM
- So sweet, Eve ... last line gave me a smile - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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